Friday, July 30, 2010

Depth of secrets,,,

Rust and scars,
Do challenged me,
But I stayed strong and tight,
Until the right key turned,
To reveal the secrets in me...







This story is in response to the picture prompt offered by Willow at Magpie Tales.  Hope you will find it interesting and thanks for stopping by:)
Posted by swputh at 7:50 AM
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14 comments:

  1. LindaJuly 30, 2010 at 8:04 AM

    Oh, I like this one! Nice.

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  2. signed...bkmJuly 30, 2010 at 8:40 AM

    Nicely done...the right key is what it takes..bkm

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  3. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJuly 30, 2010 at 9:15 AM

    the lock's perspective,
    so well done,
    loved the strong and tight part.

    beautiful magpie!

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  4. spacedlawJuly 30, 2010 at 9:24 AM

    Was it worth staying for?

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  5. Kathe W.July 30, 2010 at 10:58 AM

    Fabulous! I love this!

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  6. Brian MillerJuly 30, 2010 at 11:48 AM

    nice. too many give it up to the first key to come along...

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  7. Maude LynnJuly 30, 2010 at 6:03 PM

    Very nice!

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  8. Marilyn & JeffJuly 30, 2010 at 7:48 PM

    Oh this is so beautiful!

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  9. HelenJuly 31, 2010 at 9:25 AM

    Oh, I can just see your poem incorporated into a wonderful fairy tale ... lovely!

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  10. Tess KincaidJuly 31, 2010 at 7:37 PM

    Ah, yes, just the right key will do the trick.

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  11. RAAugust 1, 2010 at 3:54 AM

    Great job! So much beauty in simple words. :)

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  12. Sam LiuAugust 1, 2010 at 10:04 AM

    Beautiful, personification at its absolute best. This is a wonderful poem :)

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  13. Kathe W.August 1, 2010 at 10:17 AM

    Cheers-have a great Sunday! Or whatever day it is for you! ~:-)
    http://www.blogger.com/post-edit.g?blogID=29273583&postID=3452695282812741651

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  14. Tumblewords:August 2, 2010 at 8:11 PM

    Oh, nice!

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