Friday, July 30, 2010

Depth of secrets,,,

Rust and scars,
Do challenged me,
But I stayed strong and tight,
Until the right key turned,
To reveal the secrets in me...








This story is in response to the picture prompt offered by Willow at Magpie Tales.  Hope you will find it interesting and thanks for stopping by:)

14 comments:

  1. Nicely done...the right key is what it takes..bkm

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  2. the lock's perspective,
    so well done,
    loved the strong and tight part.

    beautiful magpie!

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  3. nice. too many give it up to the first key to come along...

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  4. Oh, I can just see your poem incorporated into a wonderful fairy tale ... lovely!

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  5. Ah, yes, just the right key will do the trick.

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  6. Great job! So much beauty in simple words. :)

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  7. Beautiful, personification at its absolute best. This is a wonderful poem :)

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  8. Cheers-have a great Sunday! Or whatever day it is for you! ~:-)
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